Oh Candy Darling

Focal point of model in center could be little softer skin looks little dry compared to the blend in softness around... shadows on face seem a little dark takes away from models face a bit... timelessness of emotion could be a little stronger... all around still I give a four out five stars for how it looks outfit scene and emotional presence is still there models form is nice as well

I am not a professional artist or critique at all... it asked for my honest critique so that's what I see and felt... I hope I didn't offend you still a very nice picture regardless keep it up.